Section 1, first line, second sentence. f in faction is not capitalized and should be for the beginning of a sentence.
'Main Features' section, inconsistency in end punctuations, some sentences have periods, some don't
Everything below 'Main Features' section, not sure if it is supposed to be like that but almost no text is capitalized
'Character Skills' section, second sentence, '...task. eg. The higher...' Not sure on the rules for abbreviations such as eg. and etc. but it doesn't look right, though it could be right. Maybe it should be capitalized or something.
'Character Skills' section, second paragraph, 'your character reaches new Experience Level', should have an 's' after level, so 'Experience Levels'.
'Character Skills' section, General sub-section, Heavy Projectile Weapons, reads 'E-Web etc', should read 'E-Web etc.' with period at the end.
'Factions' section, second sentence, towards the end, should be '...companies, etc.'
'Factions' section, second line, should read '...datacards, etc. and have...'
'Renaming a faction' section, faction should be capitalized as it is a title.
I apologize if some of these are too insignificant for anyone to care about, I was kinda bored today and felt like skimming over some of the rules for some CP opportunities ;)
Ill continue to post more discoveries in here as they come
Edited By: Manchaita Manchatcha on Year 6 Day 252 0:18
Ok, i've fixed typos 1-5 and 7-9. Can't fix 6 since it's stored in the database as a skill description (for Heavy Projectile Weapons skill).
Could you also tell me on which page the 10th error is, so i can fix that too?
Already awarded you a few CPs.
10th, maybe its just my browser, but when I pick a faction type, instead of vehicle/ship names, it says object, the number of 'objects" depending on how many vehicles/ships that particular faction type gets. Its just on the create a faction page (cant view it because Im in a faction...)
'Health' section, subtitle 'Stats Points', '...Unarmed Combat and Dodge level', should have a comma before and, as there are more than two items in the series (or three, whatever, its a lot of items)
'Health' section, subtitle 'Extra Points', 'Received one single time', repeated meaning. Should read 'Received one time'.
'Health' section, sentence after the points list, '...nearest whole number Character Creation Guide.'. Ending doesn't make sense. Recommend '...whole number (view the Character Creation Guide).'
'Introduction' section, first line, '...weapons, items and raw materials...'. Should be a comma before 'and' as there are many items in that series.
15. 'You are not allowed to trade for CPs While in Travel.
You are not allowed to exchange for CPs unless you are standing on the surface of a planet (not in anything) (you are allowed credits)'. That error comes up after I traded CP's for credits. Recommending it is removed since it is stated that CP-credit exchanges can be done anytime, anywhere and you wouldn't be able to see this anyways anywhere because you can't even try to trade for vehicles/ships while traveling.
Perfecting the Combine, one error at a time.
EDIT: I've noticed this all throughout the Combine and I'll mention it even though it may not be considered significant. In abbreviations, you always put 's after the abbreviation, not just an s. For example, I own a few Star Destroyers. If I were to use the abbreviation SD, it should be written as I own a few SD's, not SDs (it will be a pain in the ass but if you want me to follow up on this last point and pick them all out, I will)
Edited By: Manchaita Manchatcha on Year 6 Day 252 1:42
Ok, first of all I will send the bugs via e-mail from now on.
Second of all, I'm just saying that in true grammar (maybe it is just an English thing) to write the plural of abbreviations, you put a 's and not just an s. Meaning a 's means both possessive and plural. Like I said, it really doesn't matter (plus it would be a pain to find every single one) seeing as how it's already done everywhere and ignored.