::Forum - Description of Ships/Vehicles......

Year 6 Day 251 21:47	Description of Ships/Vehicles......
Neres Warjan	What is needed for describing a Ship or else, send some to Keir, but dont know if he/she try to use it or deleted it because they aren`t good, too long, somethings missing,..... ____________ General Sir Neres Warjan C.F. Manager of Recruitment Tresarian Army CO Ministry of Military Operations Tresario Star Kingdom

Year 6 Day 254 3:13	Description of Ships/Vehicles......
Wilhelm von Ismay	Look over existing ones for examples and you should have a good idea of what's required. ____________ Patriarch of House Ismay
Year 6 Day 255 4:56	Description of Ships/Vehicles......
Marcus Dren	Be short if you can. Describe the device. Give it a bit of character or background, say a sentance worth. ____________

Year 6 Day 255 8:37	Description of Ships/Vehicles......
Teniel Djo	And avoid saying "It is 400 metres in length, and has ten turbolasers and an ion battery", which seems to be one of the most common errors, simply describing the statistics that are already there - another one is don't mention the Emperor, the Battle of Yavin or anything like that :) ____________

Year 6 Day 255 23:28	Description of Ships/Vehicles......
Neres Warjan	Okay, no prob, short, describe the thing. To whom i send them? If i click to "Submit Description" it automatically opens the mail-browser to send them to Keir, and he/she should get some descriptions i send. :) ____________ General Sir Neres Warjan C.F. Manager of Recruitment Tresarian Army CO Ministry of Military Operations Tresario Star Kingdom

Year 6 Day 256 1:02	Description of Ships/Vehicles......
Khan	aye, Keir is the one you want. Teniel is Keir. ____________ Kids these days!

Year 6 Day 256 5:26	Description of Ships/Vehicles......
Marcus Dren	But make em good, i think i submited maybe 19 and so far only 2 of those went through, they may still be being checked but i don't know, keir must recieve so many so i doubt low quality spam descripts would be appreciated.. ____________

Year 6 Day 256 7:42	Description of Ships/Vehicles......
Teniel Djo	For the record Marcus, still sifting through yours...and there's a lot more than 19 :P But it seems around a third to a half of yours will be accepted in the end, they're pretty awesome :) Sorry about the delay, I'm trying to get better! (RL is being a bitch atm, struggling with a few issues including motivation, but I'm getting better ;) ) ____________

Year 6 Day 256 11:29	Description of Ships/Vehicles......
Neres Warjan	No prob, real life goes before any other things. ____________ General Sir Neres Warjan C.F. Manager of Recruitment Tresarian Army CO Ministry of Military Operations Tresario Star Kingdom

Year 6 Day 257 4:50	Description of Ships/Vehicles......
Marcus Dren	Yeh life can throw alot at you, went through exams recently and already gearing up for another set. We're all thankfull you stick with it. On a happier note i may actually get me a ship eventually, its slow doing it by descripts but i feel like its somthing that actually helps the combine so i plan to stick with it. Of course if you'd like to give me a freighter. :) no i thought not :( Edited By: Marcus Dren on Year 6 Day 267 5:45 ____________

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